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Welcome to my As foundation portfolio blog. Here you will find research and planning, construction evidence and evaluation for my coursework project.

Tuesday 31 January 2012

Peer assesment of Flat Plans and Ideas.

Peer Feedback;
  • Use of too many pictures.
  • The layout of the front cover is effective.
  •  Need to change my colour scheme to fit my genre.
  • Change fonts, by making them more of a house style and connecting them to my genre.
  • Use images that will relate more to the topic and genre of the magazine, i will do this by making sure i know what my main sell line will be and then create and image that will relate more to that.
Improvements i am going to make;
  • I will cut down on the amount of images i have used on all of my pages and make the larger images more bold and eye catching.
  • I will change some of the images and graphics to match my genre.
  • I will change my colour scheme to use bolder and more eye catching colours for my target audience.
  • I will make sure i use the space i have to add more sell lines, and interesting things that will attract my target audience more.
  • I will make sure my images are ranged but still have the same genre.
  • I will use different shots, on my front cover i will use a medium close up shot on my front cover, in my contents page i will change the main image i have used and use a group of people instead in a high angle full length shot. This means that it will show a variety of shots in my magazine which will interest my audience and attract them to my magazine.


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